Final assignment for the “Master of Text” course. Literary editor: “We were pleasantly surprised. In many ways it’s a thing in itself, of course, but the story of a boy and a girl is real.” 1st expert: “I have a strange impression from your text. You demonstrate literary ability and at the same time an unwillingness to create a story. These or those techniques are not an end in themselves; they are needed only to fulfill your plan. By themselves they only confuse. Wandering through allusions - they don’t hurt. The question is empathy, and it’s quite difficult to worry while watching the technical execution of this or that sketch.” 2nd expert: “Brilliant. Four lines that complement each other, assembled into a single whole. You can criticize on little things. Or, let's say, for a lack of sacredness. Maybe it would be worth sharpening the “bloody” touch announced at the beginning or detailing the girl a little more, deepening the association with “manga”. But I won’t, because I don’t know if this will destroy the feeling of integrity. What you achieved is already pretty cool.”